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I used to go the top of the Churchill Building to read. It had a spectacular view and the air always seemed fresher. At the end of my reading session I would go to the edge and look down at all the ant-sized passerby. I'd sit there, legs dangling, knowing that with one strong breeze my life would sputter out like a small flame at the wick's tip of a candle. I'd thought about jumping off and how exhilarating that would feel. But I never did it. Until today.
A very short piece. Perhaps the beggining of a story. If you have any comments or constructive critisism, especially in particular with the prose itself, please, please tell me. I`d appreciate any feedback, positive or negative. Thank you.

Update: I was wondering why I wasn't receiving any comments- turns out I'd accidentally left my comments disabled. I humbly apologize.
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